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9. Paper 3 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

final draft After reading Professor Lee's feedback, I realized that I made many mistakes in paper 3. Therefore, I reviewed the assignment requirements and revised my paper by connecting Professor Lee's feedback with the expectations for paper. Through this writing process, I finally understood the format of "work cited" and "in text citation." I also reviewed the structure and argumentative methods of academic writing.

8. Paper 2 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

In paper 2, I still had problems with unclear language, incorrect punctuation, and the improper use of the first person to express opinions. With Professor Lee's feedback, I further learned the basic principles of essay writing and better understood the mistake I made.

7. Paper 1 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

FIRST DRAFT FINAL DRAFT Reflection on my writing process This is my first essay, in fact, I am not really know what can I do. First, I try to reread the all of article that I've learned in class. Second, I made the topic what I choose. Then I try to use the quote from I've learned in class to try to support my topic. The big challenge is how to paraphrase, cite sources correctly and format correctly when quoting materials. A meaningful lesson from this process is after teacher point my mistake, I can realized how to use the correct cite sources format.

6. Evidence of Paper Rewrite Reflection (Wrapper)

After reading all of my paper feedback from Professor Lee. I realized that I have not yet fully grasped the techniques and methods of writing. I don't clearly express my arguments, and i also mad mistakes with punctuation and sentence structure. With the help of the Professor Lee and tutor Losia, I gradually corrected my errors. I understand that I need more time to review what was taught in class and to read more books in order to improve my writing skills.

5. Office Hours/Student Hours

A. Evidence of meeting with your professor (Esther Lee) or DS (Loisa Chen) during office hours or tutoring hours. B. Write a brief summary of the meeting. What was your takeaway from the experience? Meeting with our DS, Loisa Chen, was a valuable experience. I asked her all of my questions, and she responded with clear, thoughtful answers. She patiently answered my questions, and meeting with Losia was very helpful for my learning.