7. Paper 1 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

FIRST DRAFT

FINAL DRAFT

Reflection on my writing process

This is my first essay, in fact, I am not really know what can I do. First, I try to reread the all of article that I've learned in class. Second, I made the topic what I choose. Then I try to use the quote from I've learned in class to try to support my topic. The big challenge is how to paraphrase, cite sources correctly and format correctly when quoting materials. A meaningful lesson from this process is after teacher point my mistake, I can realized how to use the correct cite sources format.

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4. Distance Between Us - 2 Journal Submissions

1. Signed American Language Classroom Agreement + How to avoid cheating and plagiarizing How can students avoid cheating and plagiarizing? First, don't be laze. Take time to do your homework. Don't wait the last time to do the work. Second, focus on the class. Carefully to listen to what the teacher says and what is the important things need to learn or to do. Third, don't afraid of make mistake for homework. Just try to do the best. No worries is 100% correct or not. We are still learn, and improve our ability. Cheating and Plagiarizing is not help students learn knowledge, and you are not get any improve and waste your time. I think students avoid cheating and plagiarizing is the important things.

6. Evidence of Paper Rewrite Reflection (Wrapper)

After reading all of my paper feedback from Professor Lee. I realized that I have not yet fully grasped the techniques and methods of writing. I don't clearly express my arguments, and i also mad mistakes with punctuation and sentence structure. With the help of the Professor Lee and tutor Losia, I gradually corrected my errors. I understand that I need more time to review what was taught in class and to read more books in order to improve my writing skills.

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